Followed disappearing footsteps in the sand
slipped on rocks wet with morning dew
followed disappearing footsteps in the sand
dreams just out of reach I pursue
almost unlocked the secrets and then
slipped on rocks wet with the morning dew
Still, I climbed again, again, and again
in the park where millions roam
almost unlocked the secrets and then
succumbed to lost soul’s syndrome
Nevertheless I still believe that answers can be found
in the park where millions roam
just a little coaxing, truth holds me spellbound
pursuing the clues of all those before me
I still believe that answers can be found
much as at times I want to flee
I followed disappearing footsteps in the sand
pursuing the clues of all those before me
Followed disappearing footsteps in the sand
photo: mine
prompts: Poets on the Page, Five Minute Friday/Write31Days, WP Daily Post, #StartAFire
Lovely turn on the terzanelle!
Visiting from October Poetry Writing Month.
Secret Summoning – A Terzanelle of Call to Tell
We’re on the home stretch for the October challenge!
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Thanks so much! I’m happy we connected. I love your site. I nominated you for the 3 Days 3 Quotes challenge. You can find the details on my page.
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There is mystery and answers to be found here within nature both in the park and even among all the people. I think the best answers are found following the footsteps on the beach. Great poem.
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Thank you. I agree! I couldn’t imagine living far from the shore.
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That’s a beautiful place to be so near too 🙂
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I love the clever use of repetition that also develops the ideas. Lovely.
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Thanks. It was my attempt at a terzanelle poem.
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