Do you hear time?
Memories disperse like crumbs on water,
hoping to feed the soul’s hunger
A need to validate even an inconsequential life
Established with each new breath and defined by the last,
it passes, deliberately partitioning experiences
A rhythmic beat reckons gains and losses
Did it loiter, sweet honey dripping from the hive,
as the comfort of the day murmured reassurance
Did it explode, speeding into the night,
as the search for adventure marked a misspent youth
Did it become suspended, exquisite anticipation,
as your trembling lips first whispered I love you
Did it consume every breath, punishingly indifferent,
as it ran out for the one that held your heart
I hear time with every tick of the clock
Slivers of yesterday’s laughter soothe the sound of long ago tears
Songs in time tell a story only we can write
photo: Pixabay
prompt: Ellaine’s Place
You have an interesting take on time – a concept that captures my interest. You describe its variety, the exploding, loitering, consuming, suspended… All wonderfully described. My favorite, though is “Established with each new breath and defined by the last, / it passes, deliberately partitioning experiences” So well crafted!
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Than k you!
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Beautiful. Memories both good and bad but laughter soothes the tears.
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Yes, thankfully. Thanks!
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Hi! What an interesting take on my prompt. Wonderful poem. 🙂
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Thanks for the great prompt!
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You’re very welcome. I like writing with prompts myself and it’s even more fun when someone else likes them, too. 🙂
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Absolutely. The best part of prompts is being part of a community. 🙂
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