She
loved
him first
Connections
their past, our future
Her memory, one we honor
I
hold
this gift
in my heart
A shared family
from one woman to another
photo: Jewels For Me
prompts: OctPoWriMo, MLMM Saturday Mix
She
loved
him first
Connections
their past, our future
Her memory, one we honor
I
hold
this gift
in my heart
A shared family
from one woman to another
photo: Jewels For Me
prompts: OctPoWriMo, MLMM Saturday Mix
[…] Rings by Michele Vecchitto – a Fibonacci poem about the mother of her stepchildren […]
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Beautiful!
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Thank you
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I feel the feeling of respect in this piece. Beautiful.
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Thanks. It was a tough one because didn’t want to offend my husband’s kids, but they we all on board with it.
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Beautiful.
Such a gift to this man and his children.
The respect and love shine throgh your poem.
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Thanks. I never met my husband’s first wife, but I feel I know her through my husband and his children. 🙂
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🙂
It shines!
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Beautiful. Love the feeling in this duet of fibs.
(And they’re still about animals….humans are animals 😊)
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Love that! Thank you.
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This is beautiful, Michele. “A shared family
from one woman to another” struck me. Thank you. xoA
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Thank you so much!
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Sweet honoring. Well done.
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Thank you!
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