A familiar rumble – these freight cars that
lumber across railroad tracks just down the hill
Sound that becomes something physical,
a rolling repetition that echoes in my chest
and vibrates under my feet
It used to unnerve me
this sense of something approaching
a foreboding of sorts
Filled with trepidation each evening, I sat inside and listened
a contrivance of my own making designed to condemn
Some nights a dense fog would roll in over crashing ocean waves,
each part filling space in the overwhelming silence
They joined together to create a symphony in the dark
Music to hearten even suspicious spirits
A flirtation between fear and hope
Like a song yet unwritten, the whistle called
from that place just down the hill…
a promise of movement from here to there
Inspired to make a change,
I drew mandalas on empty walls
photo: Pixabay
prompts: Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Wordle 185, Tuesday Chatter
Lovely. I get it. I’ve written about trains, too. We live one block below the tracks. I take a certain comfort from them when they pass at night. It makes me feel that I don’t have to stress about the world — that it goes on without me whether I’m there to keep an eye on it or not. 🙂
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I love that thought! Thank you
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This was truly beautiful and inspiring. Love the line “a flirtation between fear and hope” Super!!!
Chuck
xoxo
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Thank you so much 😊
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Come and enjoy “Forgiveness”!!
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Thanks for sharing!
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You are so welcome! Great post!
Chuck
xoxo
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Sharing a lovely piece by a visitor at the Tuesday Chatter Cafe.
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
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Thank you for sharing your lovely read on Tuesday Chatter. Reblogging.
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Thank you! I’m excited to participate.
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Anytime. You write beautifully.
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