Here in the quiet places
where sleep brings respite and peace
I am lost in your arms
Healing found in your embraces
calms a troubled mind as worries cease
Here in the quiet places
Must be spells and magic charms
this power to soften and strengthen in a space
where sleep brings respite and peace
And when morning comes, when my eyes meet yours
I know this is what I cannot live without – these moments
I am lost in your arms
photo: mine
prompts: Go Dog Go Cafe – Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge
Aw.
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This line “this power to soften and strengthen in a space” – yes!! I love it and the truth behind it. Also – what form did you use? It lends itself so well to the rhythm and feeling of your words.
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Thanks! This is a Cascade poem. I love its simplicity. The format is ABC, abA, cdB, efC.
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It is quite a beautiful form. Thank you for the info!
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Definitely, awww moments! Love it.
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Thank you 🙂
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The last stanza is epic…i love it..
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you for sharing ❤
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I loved this wonderfully romantic poem! I so agree that the haven of the arms of your Beloved is heaven! Thanks so much for this!!!
xoxoxo
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You are very sweet. Thank you
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Always a pleasure to share your writing with followers!!
xoxoxo
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In the quiet places where I find my creative muse. In the quiet places where I fine healing and peace. Lovely poem and I so agree!
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Beautiful words. Thank you!
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These two lines explain to me the entire feeling of your lovely poem.
” And when morning comes, when my eyes meet yours
I know this is what I cannot live without”
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Thanks. It is such a great feeling when you know you are with the person meant for you.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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lovely – here in the quiet places ,- I feel the peace that surrounds you are blessed
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Thank you!
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