What wonders weave within
silver skies strewn with stardust
candid choices castigate
lone lovers lost like lambs
Brother, beneath broken leaves of burdock
unrest undulates until the unlucky unite
Dare to dash dilemmas
Dare to dream
Waiting with wavering wishes
she silently serenades serenity
kissing keys to the kingdom
you yoke with a yeoman’s yearnings
Together, tomorrow’s tale testifies
with welcome and wonder
Value voices venerated and verified
Accept all this love she avows
What wonders weave within
hearts hearing humbled hymns
photo: Pixabay
prompt: #Octpowrimo2018 – Day 28, Sunday’s Whirligig 185
Writing and Reflections 
Absolutely brilliant!❤
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Thank you!
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How inventive this poem was. It is alwasy good to see other experiment with the form of the poetry.
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loved your poetic devices…the use of alliteration and consonance.
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Thank you!
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Really loved the alliteration which enhanced the message so well!
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Thanks! It was a new form for me. Not sure I captured it exactly…
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I was carried away by the sensual sound of your stanzas 🙂
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Thank you! That’s encouraging especially since I was unsure of this one.
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I loved it! Keep it up!
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Well done on the form!
I’m not sure it’s one I particularly like, and I must admit I wasn’t at all interested in trying it. Oh well! 😀
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To be honest, I didn’t love the form and I’m not at all sure I did it justice. I do like the challenge of trying something new, but I’m not likely to use the form again.
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😊
For me, just going through the day was challenging enough. No need to add poetry to it 😉
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Thanks for sharing.
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