Spent
the day
by the bay
to find my soul
on a quiet Sunday
Held my breath on a grassy knoll
as I let the Universe take control
I wondered about choices and what each one meant
Some responses were aimed to cajole
Others to comfort and console
As my troubles gave way
I let each goal
spin and sway…
this day
spent
photo: mine
prompt: OctPoWriMo 2020 Day 18
A beautiful introspective poem.
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Thank you. I was inspired after spending the day at a beautiful park with my sister.
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Great!
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Great use of the form. Looks complicated. Well done !
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Thank you. The was my second attempt. I scrapped the first one! 🤣
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